Too many spelling errors. Too many of the pictures darkish/foreboding. If the essay text itself is similar, too bad. No agriculture. No schools with schoolchildren. Much missing if the purpose was to reflect life, day-to-day existence.
I picked three photos of people I know personally.
1) Daniella Weiss in Kedumim:
2) Sharon Katz, husband Izzy and family in Efrat:
3) Moriyah Avraham-Greenglick here in Shiloh:
Sorry, but I missed the full essay itself (I caught first the photo essay).
Here it is. I'll read it through and maybe will comment, so, do come back.
And one more photograph of a neighborhood in Shiloh:
4) Einat Bloch:
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