Sun Slipping Up Into the Sky Over Shiloh

This morning as I walked out of my house at 6:20 AM in Shiloh, in the distance on the horizon over the hills, beyond the caravans and Shvut Rachel across on the next ridge, I spied the sun slipping up into the dark clouds which have brought us late winter rain these past two days:

is that a good start for a song's lyrics?

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