The Headline
Gaza: Israeli Troops Kill 2 in Raid
Published: August 2, 2007
The body
Israeli forces killed two armed Palestinians and wounded several others during an army incursion into northern Gaza. The dead men belonged to the military wings of Hamas and the Democratic Front for the Liberation of Palestine, according to statements from the groups.
You noticed the difference, yes?
Why couldn't the headline editor (yes, they have story editors, foreign desk editors, photo editors and headline editors) compose this text, for example:
Two terrorists killed by Israeli troops
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